Thursday, November 29, 2007

The Magic is Gone

The cold morning breeze
Brings a promise of better things
And although I may freeze
Like a bird on its wings
I take a walk through the forest
The sun’s rays are just breaking through
And their myriad patterns
Are like a lover’s dance
The dew glistens on the leaves
The dancing shafts of light from the sun’s rays
Create a beautiful kaleidoscope of colour
I pick up a leaf
And hold it to the sun
Suddenly the dawn breaks
The dew evaporates
And the magic is lost

7 comments:

betty said...

aaawwwwww gone like GONE and ain't coming back?
Nice poem.

xs said...

Poems tena? Nice nice

Tandra said...

know that exact moment..that moment right there in the last line

Frankie said...

thanks betty,
Xs, now am just poetic..
Tandra... i know that moment when it finally dawns on u that there was no magic at all...

modo's still here said...

aw shucks. indeed a nice poem (i'll ask also here...hii i hope sio a true, er, story? poem?)

Kirima said...

Nice poem! Bittersweet.

Frankie said...

yeah kirima... i love rereading it too.. just those bittersweet moments in life..
@modo..
not really true..just a bit true